but for a first attempt, it's pretty ok.
don't have a name for it yet.
if you have any name ideas, let me know.
but here it is:
Credit I give you too much of,
Much more than you deserve.
Yet how should I proceed to love
You with your sweet nerve?
The seasons war within
Winter to summer, harsh winter
Back to serene, playful summer again
Only for that to be once more interred.
Behind your eyes is a storm of the seasons
A blizzard of cold, icy stares
Yet time after time, your seasons change with no reason
These swings are getting us nowhere.
Yet like after a storm, there is a calm
All is resolved, your hand in my palm.
well, there it is...